Isaiah C. California

Does Pokemon Go have exercise involved

My summary is about Pokemon go and how there is not enough Poke stops.

October 27, 2016

Dear Future President,

Hi i’m Isaiah Cruz from HSHMC, I am 12 and I am in 7th grade and the topic I will be writing about today is Pokemon Go. One reason why i’m talking about this famous game is because I believe that there is a problem and that problem is there is not enough poke stops and if you don’t know what that is, (then I will tell you )a poke stop is a thing that you go to when you need more of that of that product.For example Pokeballs or health potions.

I believe that exercise is good for your body and Pokemon Go provides that for you and your family because you walk, run and jog and that is good for you but there is a problem if there is not enough poke stops then why should people get up and walk around. Sure there are eggs that you get Pokemon out of them but that is only one thing there should be more activities to do so people get to have fun and get lots of exercise


Ms. President some of the ways that we can address/solve are adding more poke stops , constantly adding new stuff to the game .These solutions will help because people could lose weight, there will go outside more and not stay in the house and eat and munch on food while there could be outside losing weight .

'’Here are some facts that you could read and why we need this game all around the world: risk for global deaths. At least 2.8 million In 2008, more than 1.4 billion adults, 20 and older, are overweight. Of these over 200 million men and nearly 300 million women were obese.35% of adults aged 20 and over were overweight in 2008, and 11% were obese.65% of the world’s population live in countries where overweight and obesity kills more people than underweight.Overweight and obesity are the fifth leading adults die each day.’’

‘’In fact, exercise is one of the most important parts of keeping your body at a healthy weight. Exercise helps people lose weight and lower the risk of some diseases.Exercising to maintain a healthy weight decreases a person's risk of developing certain diseases, including type 2 diabetes and high blood pressure.’’

Thank you for your consideration,


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