Ben N. California


VAWA ( Violence Against Women Act) and the three strike law needs to be improved in America.

I have an issue with two laws, in America, that are unfair. I believe they should be removed or improved. The two laws I wish to be removed or improved are the VAWA (Violence Against Women Act), the Three strike law. In addition to the VAWA, there should be an act protecting males.  Lastly for the the three strike law could be customized depending on the situation. 

The first law that needs your attention is the VAWA. From what said about this topic, “VAWA encourages women to make false allegations, and then petition for full child custody and a denial of all fathers' rights to see their own children....” This shows that women can create these false allegations creating a big disadvantage to males. Women should be required to submit a video recording, or provide further evidence. This would prevent people from bringing forward false allegations.

I would also like to change the three strike law in California. I want to fix this because the law can be unfair sometimes depending on the situation, and it can decide someone's fate by something for little or big that can last for 25 years or more. From what it states on KQED, “ Last year, however, California voters approved Proposition 36, which softened the law by focusing violent offenses,” they soften the law to more dangerous one for people who like shoplift three times. Although, the law is unfair considering how many options they have for each situation being ended from the three strike law since a waste of time waiting 25 years of your life just sitting there doing nothing. 

 Finally I would like to say how these two laws should either be improved or removed in any cases. This is why we must make a stance for our rights to make these laws better. For the male rights and the three strike law in California. Finally thank you future president for listening to my speech to make the U.S a better place.


Ben Nguyen         

Works cited:

Williams, By Matthew. “The Three Strikes Law Is Unfair.” KQED Learning, Kqed, 3 Dec. 2013,

Against Women Act (VAWA) a Good Law? - ACLU Pros &Amp; Cons -” ProConorg Headlines, American Bar Association (ABA), 29 May 2008, from the memes that was created

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